This's the second of several articles I'm writing to provide simple, simple to follow essay writing tips to international pupils. I actually run the own website of mine at so I am well qualified to provide you with several of the key tips I would say would improve the majority of the essays we've submitted. My site offers a proofreading and editing service for only £8 for the first thousand words so in case you are still not 100% confident take a peek and I would really like to support you towards much more professional results in the future. And so on with the post and I am going to explain howto properly analyse the points of yours. This's the part of the essay of yours you truly have to get right to obtain the best marks you are able to. The opening statement of yours for these middle paragraphs will make a point - this could remain neutral or perhaps in case you're trying to persuade, or perhaps state the opinion of yours, it'll help support the thesis of yours; either way the point should always relate directly to answering the question. Be sure that the stage might have evidence to support it - for example' The financial position of the super powers by the 1980s had set into motion the fall of Communism' - this particular kind of statement is ok providing you are able to show why you've said it. You do not have to be neutral and nice too in the essay of yours, in case you think one answer is the appropriate one and then argue it almost as you are able to - just make certain there's always evidence, evidence, evidence. What many international pupils especially are inclined to do is simply to now write down all they know about the stage - keep in mind all of your paragraph needs to do is build the argument. When you create your point put in the evidence to support it then explain precisely how it supports it. The basic structure of each paragraph should therefore be point, evidence then an explanation of the way the evidence supports the time; this's crucial - you're not explaining the evidence itself but just how it supports the time and therefore answers the question. When you keep to this formula you'll be answering the question comprehensively and should be on your way to the very best mark; of course if you will find various arguments you'll be explaining exactly how they interlink together in answering the question - advocating some and ruling out others. The amount of the paragraphs will rely on the number of points you have to generate a good argument. The next time we will check out the conclusion and the way to bring all of your points together but at this point thanks for reading everyone;if you want more help with your written English visit the website of mine. MercuryNews